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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sun May 06, 2012 2:03 pm

Or celebrate my mom's birthday. Parents have to work on her actual birthday, so it looks like we're doing all the cake and stuff today.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Mon May 28, 2012 4:04 pm

Hmm... There seems to have been a bit of a lack of activity lately.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:42 am

DON'T WORRY I'M ALIVE!!!


I've just kinda been fairly unproductive. Well, I drew Valdin - am making a digital map of it and the surrounding areas - as well as other concept arts. I've unfortunately been rethinking a lot of Book I (mainly in Priantos' investigation and journey), so I've taken a step back again. Book II has been left fairly neglected, aside from a bit of concept art. My search for a publisher has also been put on hold for now so that I can edit Book I some more and I shouldn't actually be spending much time on this at all at the moment because I'm currently in the first of the three most important exams of my life (those being the two large Grade-11 exams (with which I'll try get into university) and the Grade-12 end-year-exam of next year). So yeah. I'll try uploading/posting any progress tomorrow.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sat Jun 02, 2012 9:38 am

WOOHOO!

Oh boy, exams. And such. Yes.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:29 am

Well, it's weekend now, so I suppose we could do that last level of Portal 2 co-op, if you want. Message me with Steam if you want. ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sun Jun 03, 2012 2:45 am

Woohoo, Portal 2. 'Twas fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sun Jun 03, 2012 11:09 am

The ending was random as hell. And lol, GLaDOS has no living test subjects again.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sun Jun 03, 2012 3:25 pm

Unless you count those three birds, although I doubt they'll last very long.

Heh, she also managed to kill what may have been some of the few survivors of the Combine taking over the Earth. Good job, GLaDOS.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Mon Jun 04, 2012 4:52 am

Anyway, we should probably get back on topic now. Oh wait, we've already figured this out... Hmmmm...


Oh, I'm also gonna redo the Book I chapter structure into a DPDPDPPDPDPD (where D = David and P = Priantos) pattern of 12 chapters. Think you can help me divide both plots into six parts?
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:48 pm

Sure thing. Sounds like fun.
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Tue Jun 05, 2012 7:17 am

Well, I'd basically like you to check which chapters (of David and Priantos separately) end the best (have endings that look like they should be chapter endings the most) or you could help identify five decisive / most plot changing moments in each of the two plot lines.

Meanwhile, I'll attempt the same and we could decide at which points in each plot line chapter endings make most sense.

Does that make sense?
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PostSubject: Re: Book II Chapter Structure   Sat Jun 09, 2012 5:08 am

Eh... Yeah. Makes sense.
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